All Comments on 'Much Mightier Than the Sword'

this story definatly has posibilities for the future

Liked the concept and the story

this could become very interesting

wow ... great start to what i expect to be an amazing series ... carry on the great work

i am waiting for the next installment

keep up the good work

Great start to a good story line maybe a little more anal action and possibly some three way action thrown in as the story unfolds

It left me quite wet, soaking the morning sheets in the wee minutes after waking and turning on my laptop to check email... check literotica...

Gotta Love MC stories the caliber of this one. Please continue!!

Awesome start...read it twice because it was so hot. Can't wait for the next part!

Great story! While you probably will write many interesting chapters to follow, it may be interesting to make this into a Chain Story. Many minds are greater than one, and you have definitely set up a great beginning to this series.

Best of luck either way...

good, except for the missile-silo metaphor. not sexy. great concept though, good plot, and very believable dialogue.

Good story, hot, well written with few errors.

If you are into MC stories, you might want to consider posting on the Erotic Mind Control Story Archive (www.mcstories.com). Which is the premier site for mind control stories.

Hope you continue it.

Really good start. Keep UP the this plot line.

its great, these things are better when they are not so heavy on commands, but thats just personal taste.

how about some more girls ?

I hope you do alot more comments and make her a submissive slave to him as well as well as more anal and role playing. I is a really good story and your very creative I hope to read alot more cause this story I hope has ALOT!! more chapters

i love this story! make a second part w/ even more girls and more sex! that was so great!

A brilliant story that's damn horny and has all sorts of potential, it could really run and run. In that it's your only story and was written two years ago, I doubt you will write any more which is a damn shame...

this is a great story! I hope u continue it!

Hope you continue this!!!

I hope their is more. It's a good storyline.

good job, you should keep going

Very good story line. Maybe you could incorporate some of her friends into this

Loved this one. It was sooo hot! I'd love for you to write another one with the exact same plot device (the magical pen), only with incest in it, like with the guy's mom and/or sister(s). That would be incredibly hot. Anyways keep up the good work!

Definitely my favorite story now and such a sexy plot. I'd be so freakin happy if you continue this series... For a while!

Amazingly written, should be made into a movie/video clip

Liked the way you made Bobby and Alexis from the Beginning and the Changes after the Pen. Seemed like an Alfred Hitchcock theme. cant wait to read more.

Thank you for the well written story. Sexy, quick, fun. I look forward to more of this story line.

The only thing that really stuck out to me is that the girl put the candle stick back after fucking her ass with it. Gross.

Excellent story, write more

Good story and very well written. Look forward to seeing what else he gets unto in the big bad world.

You have developed the story well leaving questions to both the pens power as well as how things will develop with Bobby and Alexis. Good balance of story line and erotic excitement as well. Looking forward to reading your next installment.

Thanks for such a great story. More please.

A very yummy start! I hope that you'll continue. Thank you!