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All Comments on 'Mulan Blanc Ch. 01'

by JohnOrwell

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Decent, needs an editor

Not exactly bad, but needs an editor, enough mistakes to be noticeable. Keep up the good work!C71A

mrchameleonmrchameleonover 10 years ago
Seems contrived

Not even including the the grammatical errors, the language seems forced.

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