by SanityCheck
wow what a great extension to the first book, It was great to read how Camille discovered Her talents, even thought they may not be controllable, and was able to help her friend. I am really looking forward to the third installment, to She how the trip north goes and the budding romance with Hunter
Great story. I got the same feelings when reading a police story. More close to an american Agatha Christie than to normal sci-fi. I will wait patiently for the next installment.
Great story, well written, good pacing.
I felt frustrated with the local police... I didn't feel like an overheard argument was enough intent/motive to justify 1st degree murder charges. And they kept with the "boyfriend" chirps, even though the motive was supposedly related to Ken and Malina being in a relationship...
Also seemed like Ken didn't fully show much grief about his girlfriends death, there was more emphasis on his own panic about being arrested.
I think these points can be rationalized within the story as is, but if addressed might strengthen the plot a little bit more. My 2 cents. :)