All Comments on 'Murmansk Stone'

Brilliant ok - far fetched, lots of idiosyncrasies if you stop to think. However, this is clearly meant to be entertaining and as such, it certainly succeeds. Nice fun idea.

You can tell you edited and thought about the first scenes a couple of times, butts it's kind you just blabbed sure and characters after that. The newer characters became less developed, you forgot details, seemed to get bored with your own work. As far as unbelievable premises go, this was an entertaining idea and I think after some edits would be greatly improved.

Very entertaining story line. You covered a lot of ground and the pages added up, but with a little more effort this could easily be a Sci/Fi novel of a sorts… You could use a little editing in places, and added character development, but 5* for a solid, entertaining effort!

A grand yarn.