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Anonymousover 17 years agoStop The Madness
Buddy, you need to sit down with an elementary text on grammar and proper use of punctuation, verb tense...in short, EVERYTHING. Don't post these awful (whatever you call them) things until you learn at least the basics.
Anonymousover 17 years agoAgree
The previous comment is right. If you can't improve your grammar, spelling, syntax, etc., then find an editor to help you.
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