All Comments on 'Muslim Lesbian Queens of Ottawa'

Stop writing! This is alot of garbage!!!!

When I clicked this, I really wanted to like this story for the sake of diversity. Unfortunately, it was more like an article/column about minority issues, with a bit of awkward smut thrown in.

When writing fiction, one of the best advice is "show, don't tell". You could have easily incorporated your social commentary in interaction between characters.

The characters themselves got very little attention and I did not 'feel' them at all, they were shallow descriptions rather than intimate portraits. :/

please die and stop writing