All Comments on 'Muslim Soccer Pets'

Will we get a second chapter

Great story and hope for a follow up chapter. Very well done with lots of goals scored. Thanks for you time to write for our enjoyment. Cheers

Please continue this story, it's just too good not to have a part 2. It's definitely one of my favorites of all time on here.

Great story! I love Arab women. I hope there is more to come.

Excited to see New story theme similar wit your christian girls seduction story

plot development

coach with Firdosa mom Zala -- blackmail her wit video

force threesom wit Amanda, pretty blonde teammate

StrapOn zala -- makes sure Firdosa watches from window

coach Firdosa mom Zala -- blackmail her wit video

force her seduce Khadra's mom

coach seduces Khadra

coach Trains Firdosa to become DOMinatrix -- DOM khadra in mosque

sends Firdosa to DOMinates Khadra's sister

who is studying to be muslim priest (imam)

Amanda blackmails Firdosa -- saw u enter coach bedroom

become sub to other teamates

That was amazing! I hope you would consider doing a sequel or two! Great work!

It was a great one loved reading it

you do a great job could feel earthing that was going on in it hope you do more to the girls

like talking to others about this mdel3698@aol.com

What's difference between the rapist being a man or woman? DNA evidence that can send someone to prison.

Rape

Five stars. How many Muslim men have read this? Are they ashamed of themselves for masturbating as the two Muslim women had lesbian sex with the coach?

A lot of rape vibes in this story. The women only said no like 100 times

Hot

Rape warning would been nice.

Not one of your better efforts.

Next morning after breakfast Regina headed out to her car, turning on the ignition she never heard the timer click in as the car bomb sent her on her way.

brilliant storyyyy

Oooh that was good... Really need a part 2...

Waiting for Part 2!

I see that this is a contest entry. I hope that when the contest is over you can write a sequel.

Awesome story. Can't wait for part 2.

Nice little tale.

Not one of your best but still gets a good rating. I know this is for a contest , so I hope when you are able we will see several more pages, chapters.

Pappasleaze!

Well written and really arousing! Subjugating the mother as well as the daughter, made it even hotter, as did Regina being even older, a retired corrupt cop, and her verbally abusive, manipulative raceplay (I say that as a Black woman myself).

Part 2 please, with Khadra's submission, including being turned into a humiliated, degraded pet to her Muslim best friend, Firdosa. Khadra's stronger resistance and indignation than Firdosa makes this particularly intriguing.

When is the sequel coming

fantastic… a sequel is a must!

383. Yyes. I, like the others, would like to see you finish this seduction. Female on female always revs my motor. Khadra and maybe her mother and maybe the rest of the soccer team should make the rumors come true.

Can we get part 2 please

Good start to the story. Please continue. If you are going anal,you should add spanking with it.

Good start to the story. Please continue. If you are going anal,you should add spanking with it.

When will you due a second chapter to this good story

This is disgusting. I usually like your stories but they've said no so many times. We have a word for that: Rape.

I agree with _butterfly. I don't understand how Literotica applies its standards. The author gives us a trigger warning about "race play," but she really is glorifying a long-term abuser who traffics on her superior power. It's disturbing that people thrive on the inside view of a sexual predator! (Note: I reached my assessment in the first page and didn't read further. I checked on the last couple of paragraphs and confirmed that Regina did not ultimately get her comeuppance.)

This gets my very first 1-star rating.

Are we getting a sequel. Excited to see where this story goes

That was great, thank you. Part 2 maybe?

Really need part 2 and maybe 3 please

most definitely want to know what happens next

Part 2?

that was very rapey especially with the blackmail and the hazing. but u sure can write.