by JohnathanBouy
Not bad at all for a first time. Just wondering why you went from calling your Aunt's underwear "knickers" to calling them "panties"? I favor panties, it's my fetish, but understand that most British people call them knickers. Not a big deal, just curious. Gave the story four stars because a lot of us have, or had, Aunts that we dreamed about. Most of us only get to dream though.
Dreams are often the subconscious covert desires turning overt. We are conditioned to suppress taboo desires especially incestual.
Tenderly written with Aunt Sarah's silent reaction giving a true cognitive dissonance.
Almost autobiographical
Good premise.
But sex is too rushed.
Needed to slow down. Needed more foreplay.
Needed more dialog during sex.
Four stars.