- Incest/Taboo
- My Baby
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Click hereI hated returning to work upon arriving home from our honeymoon. Olivia didn't have a job lined up as she was being picky. I was aware of what she was doing and part of me actually didn't mind. I knew what she truly wanted to do, and I wasn't going to force her into anything she didn't want to do.
A month after returning home, she was waiting for me on the couch when I walked through the door after finishing work. Looking up at me, her cheeks strained with tears, she stood up and leapt on me, kissing me with all the love and passion she felt for me. I was used to such greetings after our years together, but it still took my breath away from time to time.
"Daddy..."
"Yes, sweetheart?"
She smiled and retrieved the stick from the back pocket of her jeans. Showing it to me, I knew what the symbol meant without her needing to explain anything. "You're going to be a father again. And I'm going to be a mother." Taking my hand, she rested it on her stomach. "I'm carrying our baby, Daddy," she whispered.
I knew, in that moment, our life together was now complete.
- COMMENTS
Johnm741655 months agoExcellent story, good attention to detail. Loved the ending, 5 stars thank you.
Anonymous6 months agoCharacters like Erin really baffle me. She acts like she wants to be chosen, but given every opportunity, she does nothing to take it. What the hell does she want!? She claims not to be cheating (and I believe it in the end) but shows no affection to her husband and spends all her time on her phone - probably with her sister now that I think about it after reading the story. My opinion is that she's just mentally damaged and refuses talk about it or seek the help she needs. Instead she throws away her family. So sad.
Part of me can't help but feel it was all forced as a plot device to let the dad and daughter get together. In that sense, it didn't quite flow as naturally as I thought it would. I mean she really made zero realistic effort or gave any explanation to anyone about why? That seems really unlikely and feels like a copout on the author's part. I really wish we had got closure on what her issues really were. Yes she ended up going to therapy but WHY did she do what she did? I'm sure the husband in this case would always wonder.
If I were to make a guess about why Erin did what she did, based on everything I've read not only here but also what I've read in other stories, I imagine it started small when the daughter started showing affection for the father and he returned it in kind, as nothing but a loving father mind you - nothing sexual. In Erin's mind she started to feel like she was competing with her own daughter, and this led to her cold behaviour towards them both. Over time this escalated, probably so slowly and insidiously that she didn't really realize the true extent of it, until it was too late. She eventually concluded, incorrectly, that she had lost her husband, and probably her daughter, so why even bother trying to reconcile. Even when given clear opportunities by her husband to talk and choose him, her mind was already too far gone to allow her to accept affection, which she had convinced herself was somehow not genuine, because to her, she had already lost him. I wonder if her therapy helped her realise her mistakes. She doesn't seem like a bad person. I think she was just a victim of her own insecurities and instead of communicating with her husband (yet another perfect example of why this is key in a relationship) she let them fester and multiply to a point that destroyed her marriage. It's a real shame how someone ends up throwing away a wonderful life like this because they don't talk to their partner about what's really bothering them - DON'T MAKE THAT MISTAKE!
All that aside... the love between the father and daughter, especially hers for him, was especially deep and powerful. It was pretty much perfect. It's rare to see this in F/D stories in my experience. I honestly felt incredibly envious of the father, to have a daughter so devoted and in love with him. Sadly something I will never experience but at least I can live out that fantasy from time to time with masterpieces like this story. Thank you UltimateSin. You never fail to deliver. At least this one didn't make me cry, like some of your other works (The River comes to mind, god that one really did a number on my emotions). Of course, you did aggravate me with Erin and no reason to her behaviour, but I guess in a way it's realistic because we don't always know the "why" to situations like this in real life. Still, annoying as hell.
