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Click hereMom and dad got home just after noon, and I helped dad bring in the luggage. Sarah was about to ask mom if she had a nice time or something. However, mom beat her to it and asked if Sarah and I had heard about the gang war that happened a few blocks from here.
Sarah heard that and lost it. She started crying and hugged me tight. Mom and dad started screaming. I yelled at them, "BOTH OF YOU BE QUIET. YOU'RE UPSETTING SARAH. Now sit down and I'll tell you what happened." Sarah held me tightly while I explained how they had attacked Sarah and then I rescued her and took out my anger on them.
Sarah said, "He's my hero." Then she kissed and hugged me.
Mom said, "Well I think I'll sleep with you tonight."
Sarah said, "NO. I'm sleeping with Jimmy."
Mom said, "You cannot sleep with your brother."
Sarah screamed, "YES, I CAN. WE SLEPT TOGETHER LAST NIGHT AND WE'RE SLEEPING TOGETHER TONIGHT." Sarah continued to hug me tightly.
Dad said, "Well, if you feel safer sleeping with Jimmy, that's OK with me.
To be continued...
That was some really poor writing, I don’t know if this is your first attempt at a story, but it has no flow, the characters are “flat”, no nuances at all, and so outrageous that no one would believe that this could happen, I mean the younger brother is apparently supersized in every way, including his fighting prowess, the older sister is so clueless that she can’t figure out what she is doing wrong when choosing a mate, all in all, it’s a very bad story, but I wish you luck with your future writing.
You have some of the best one liners I have ever read in a story. The story is also sexy as well as romantic. Can't wait to read the next part.