All Comments on 'My Barista'

by JackLynch

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A lot of fine writing but not merely enough sex scenes... Hell, why did you skip the entire night's events? A bit disappointed, not gonna lie, especially since your writing is so damn good..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I really like your writing style. Thought your first to two parts were great, but this one left me wondering if I would have given Randy a second chance. I know without it all you would have had was a foot job. Still, invite me over, then through me out without a way home, on no. The only thing I would have texted back without first getting an apology would have been FUCK OFF!!!

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

My absolute favorite Carey story to date! Hope to read more about Randy … and Apollo …

Hutchison12Hutchison12almost 2 years ago

Am loving ready about Carey, can’t wait for the next adventure thanks so much for sharing these guys with us .

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Professional in a creative field. A published author in another genre. I write for myself but, like most other people, enjoy getting feedback.