All Comments on 'My Beautiful Wife'

Fantastic story!!

I read the first part and found a nicely written tale. Then stopped when i realized this was a cuck fantasy of a guy who liked the idea of his wife screwing others while he sat at home waiting. Please leave a warning at the beginning. I would not have wasted my time.

The poor little weak bois whining over somebody else's lifestyle

Stupidity runneth amok.

Oh dear, nuff said.

"We smiled at each other; this was marriage at its best."

Oh, you poor deluded fuck! Seriously, igm146, get some some help. LOL

Just another pathetic wimp cuck writer. One that can't spell and somehow got the title wrong...."My came home..." your what came home? You Dog? Your Cat? Your Horse?

Really? Will her love for her lover go away? Will this marriage last more than a month? That's how this is stupid!

tags please.

The poor use of English makes me wonder if this person is not a native speaker, and a professional translator could help. But the ideas, the conceptualization, the interpersonal interactions, the dialog and the flow of events are all so confused and make so little sense that I wonder what is actually going on in the author’s mind.

not even a wife, and a pseudo-male character that has no balls, or brains. What misguided Brit thought this shit sandwich up?

Very well written. From my point of view the story lacked only the inclusion of hubby's devouring Gabe's semen from wifey's genitals. The rest of it was spot on. Realistic conclusion, too, though not particularly stroke-worthy.

Wrong category, even if they were playing husband and wife. Without the actual marriage making splitting up a pain in the ass, there's no tension beyond waiting for the Wheel of Diseases to stop spinning and see which STD they landed on.

Sounds like real story from you!!?? I can tell from experience! Very nice! Enjoyed immensley!!!! Thanks!

Ic69hunter is the type of dude to raise another man’s kids with a smile on his face. Also eat a load out his wife’s ass.

Epilogue: Hubby came home from work two days later and everything his wife owned was gone. There was a note on the table. "I realized what a sissy wimp loser I have for a husband so I'm dumping your sorry ass and moving in with Gabe. Don't try to contact me or Gabe will beat the shit out of you. You're a pathetic excuse for a man and I never want to see you again." Hubby cried and cried, while wifey laughed and laughed starting her new life with a man who would never share her.

Another one ridiculous and irrealistic cuck tale, among the thousands already published in this category. Add the fetish and the cuck tags to this fetish fantasy.

Shit

Please tag your stories!!!

Wow, what judgmental readers! That’s a shame. One person’s turn on might be another’s turn off, but you don’t have to read it, you don’t have to finish it and you certainly don’t have to comment negatively about it. This is not only a fantasy of a large number of very secure, masculine men (see ethical non-monogamy) but is also practiced by a large number of happily married, secure couples (see stag/vixen lifestyle). I love this story because it honestly portrays that intense turn on shared by many couples: her to be a naughty wife, and him being excited by sharing his beautiful wife then hearing all about it as he reclaimed her pussy and enjoyed the feel of another man’s cum lubricating them. Thank you for writing it, and pay no attention to the closed-minded, judgmental readers.

Hi Guys and Gals,

To those liked my story, thanks for your positive comments. To those who didn't it, like it fair enough, I have no problems with that. This is called erotic fiction. Most men have sexual fantasies and many are much more devious than mine.

I'm not from the UK, I'm from Australia, Russel and Nicole helped me write it. (Not!) I used Australian spelling deliberately.

I apologise for the lack of tags, but I don't think I can add them now. And yes I made one typo in the description, but I proof read the story multiple times to find all the typos. It is always hard to proof read your own work.

Have a nice day youall, especially those of you who who get a kick criticising stories on Literotica.

You need to eat his cum from that sloppy pussy!

Great story. I like how the couple were really both turned on by her being used.

Ha ha! The usual sexless cowards attack mindlessly! Disregard them. They’re the true cucks! Great tale! Erotic and intriguing. I’d love to leave my semen in her for you! Cheers 🥂 you might like my An Invitation to Dinner series! The puritans hammered it so the rating is somewhat low, 3.5 or so. Fuck em!

Definitely listen to Ziegler. He’s trying to be an author too.

Dumb old people doing stupid things.

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They should have a wedding. They are definitely a couple. I like that he can let her fuck without fear of losing her. I don't think most wives can be trusted that much.