All Comments on 'My Best Friend: Jayden & Gabriel'

i love this story it's sweet and not all sex sex like the others, please finish i can't wait for the next chapter.

Good characters, kept me intrigued, even without any sex. Looking forward to more.

Just clean it up some more. Re-reading is key. Let someone else read it too. As someone once told me, editing goes a long way.

the story is good!interesting.although its a quarter of the story,it keeps you wanting more(which is good)...so continue it and reach the climax of the story(50%),then bring it home!its a very good story.can't wait to read more of it!!

This is starting very well! I'm really enjoying it, please hurry with more!

What a great and intriguing start...great balance of erotic charm and romance. Pleas hurry and continue!!!

Great story line, good characters... now PLEASE just use spell check and clean up the grammar a bit. Good editing makes a story so much easier to read. As is, the poor editing distracts the reader from the great story you have going on!

It's a great start, but I agree,spell check will go a long way

This story just came on my radar screen. I see the author received numerous complaints about the editing. That's understandable, but allow me to add that the raw talent on display here is such that a good editor really could work wonders with this story. I hope the complaints were not the reason for the long absence. You have great potential, author.

lol this is funny! althought im confused as to what gabriel is sorry for??