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lingerielover68lingerielover68over 4 years ago
Very nice. Thoughts about my best friend

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful Story

Unbelievably hot writing.The mounting

crescendo of desire is almost palpable. Very

similar to my first time.

MusicianElfMusicianElfover 4 years ago
Glad you're continuing

Good work. Your showing of the emotion is excellent, but you really have to work on the mechanics. For example, "No Mark, your right we can't do this again." when it should be "No Mark, you're right. We can't do this again." There are things like this sprinkled throughout the story, and they distract the reader.

That said, you have me hooked on this thread. I'm looking forward to the next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

your chapters are to short , you start and just when your getting into it , its over

NicebiguyNicebiguy4 months ago

Love to 69 with him on top.

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I was born in a small town, grew up in a catholic home, went to a French/English school, after grad moved to different parts of Canada, eventually settling in Winnipeg, I am single with two cats, I have a very busy life, with work friends and working out. I enjoy the beach and...

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