by koksocker333
your story is great but the short chapters are doing my head in... we want more!!!
Love the story-telling. Mechanics need work.
"... taking a toll" not "tole" I know, picky, picky, picky...
Seriously. Love the story.
Love your story! Mechanics need work.
Looking forward to more of Tommy and Mark. I'm guessing that Kim is going to cause a scene at work during Tommy's presentation.
Mark really needs to see a doctor to document the abuse he's received.