All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Brother Pt. 03'

Great sex, 3 men, hot sex. Pt. 04 please! Having sex w a bi man is incredible especially with 2 sexy brothers.

This chapter (even for erotica) lacked any logic whatsoever:

1. Michael knew of Trent’s real feelings for Joey, but flat out lied to Joey

2. Yet Joey gets over that huge lie instantly

3. Likewise Trent instantly forgives Michael’s blatant betrayal despite a major fist fight

4. Joey clears his head, meets a random stranger, and figures it’s best to fuck her

5. The acrobatics of that fuck defy reality

6. Trent says he’s only bi for Joey but immediately falls on his brother’s cock

7. The serious girlfriend is again never mentioned with Trent referring to himself several times now as gay

8. Despite both bros pledging devotions of love for Joey, both are completely ok if Joey never forgives them for fucking each other.

9. The vibrator swap and naked walks home are ludicrous

10. The set-up for a threesome despite all the dishonesty here is such bullshit

Even in an erotic story of fantasy, there needs to be things that make sense in the story and almost none of this chapter made a bit of sense.

Started out really really good but went off the rails big time.

BiParkerGuy Yeah I know. I plan to write a new version of Part 3 that fits the narrative more and either delete this or call this an alternate part or something.

I can’t wait to see what happens when Abigail pops up in chapter 4. It would be awesome if she turned out to be Trent’s girlfriend and she brings her sisters over and it turns into one mass orgy. I think the numbers will balance out. Just a thought.