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by NovicewriterJo
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Anonymousabout 8 years agogood start
but you need to watch your verb tenses and contractions. for myself if the grammar isn't right and there are typos it kills a story. keep practicing. i wish there were half-stars, you'd have gotten a 3.5 for this one
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