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All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girlfriend Ch. 03'

by trixieadara

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Grammar...

Love the story, but one thing really bugged me in this chapter.

You wrote about Maria "She has been the extravert who drug me out of my room and out of depression."

The past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged', not 'drug'.

nerbusnerbusover 6 years ago
Wow!

I am loving all things about this story... the way it unfolds... the writing... everything. Excellent job!

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My name is Trixie Adara. I write erotica, almost exclusively lesbian erotica. I prefer mind control stories or any story with an element of the supernatural. However, I also love the slow build and an element of realism to my stories. If you love my work, please check out my...