All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Wedding Ch. 01'

Yes more please.

Very dangerous game they are playing here. Devin is lusting after his best friend’s closeted bi dad (in their family home during her engagement party, surrounded by many family and friends). Jack is about to fuck his daughter’s best friend in his own home during a huge family celebration. Seems too risky to be real, but also is very hot. Next chapter please!

Sooo hot. I can’t wait for more.

It's an exciting setting, and the rising heat is palpable. Maybe one more read-through would have helped you to catch the dozen or so grammar and spelling errors that remain. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Yeah right, I'll just bet you didn't run to that office. You probably when by those tables so fast the tablecloths were sucked off by the vortex. But no need to be embarrassed, because I'd have been ten feet ahead of you. OMG, an ex-military 6'4" daddy, I think I'm in love. I can almost feel those cold metal dog tags tapping my back while he pounded my ass into the floor. Chapter #2 of this ***** plus story can't come fast enough. MLF

Do some proof reading.

ie 3rd to last paragraph….

Grindr for the win! Five Stars and Following

Late to the party after seeing Ch. 06 & 07 post. Good stuff! Five Stars from me!!

Wrong story to comment on! Apologies!!