All Comments on 'My Bestfriend'

Part two definitely!!

Part two please!!!!

Good so far hope you do more

Very nice, wonderfully erotic. Looking forward to more.

yes part 2 please

luv the story

Well that was ridiculous. Nothing like a little rape between friends.

Loved it, really want a part 2 please.

will Lauren let Penelope sleep on the floor? will she say you can sleep on the floor but that tongue better me between my leg in the morning? wouldn't it be nice for Lauren to have her very own PET fo the camping trip? Yes please for another chapter. Pappasleaze!

Yeah...this is probably not in the right category. This is not lesbian "sex."

I've had stories reclassified before being published by the mod community, and didn't think about it when the story was published without modification... so I understand the frustration with this being ALSO a rape/unwilling story as well as Lesbian based. But I also intend on releasing multiple chapters as the story progresses and when I classified the story I didn't take JUST this part into consideration. So my apologies, feedback noted for the future!

Yes definitely a part two

Part two please

Definitely needs a part 2 and the category should be stay the same. Great job!

I hate to pile on, but this is not cool. I understand you intend this to be an ongoing story, but I can't see how we're to get behind your protagonist after this. A tiny bit of awareness from Lauren would have helped. As it is, the next chapter should involve the police. This is a great example as to why lesbian and gay categories should have sub-categories.

Wish there was a content/trigger warning for rape. Not sexy or fun. Rape is rape is rape. I don’t care if it’s being used to set up a long story, it’s rape. Real, loving, consensual relationships don’t begin with sexual assault.

Yes, part two. And three and four.

Ignore the critics and category enforcers. You’re a fine writer.

This is literally rape. Its disgusting and you should be ashamed. All of you have ho actually enjoyed this are also disgusting.

Can you please flag it as non-consensual/rape at the beginning? In the spot where you mentioned the characters are over 18 would work.

Rape can be triggering for survivors and if you want to create a safe space for your reader you need to consider that springing this story on them might do more harm than good.

Oh, lucky me. Didn't even get to The Rape, story lost me at *small* 32C...

Small 32C? Cs are big. Did a man write this?

Yeesh...Yeah, a disclaimer wouldn't hurt.

OK. Well that's rape isn't it

Delicious - loved it !