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Click hereKieran was delighted and very grateful to her. They kissed again and made each other more promises not to tell what had happened. Somehow Gabby knew he would be true. She knew he wasn't an asshole like other lads, which was why she had liked him to begin with.
In the quiet afterglow he asked her to be his girl, almost begged in fact, "You know I love you. I have wanted you to be my girl for ever."
Gabby manged to resist her normal inclination to make fun of this, and reassured him that she knew and understood his feelings. She tried to explain that she just wasn't ready for a relationship. That her plans for the summer and university would make it too difficult. She tried to reconcile what had happened that night. Telling him she was glad it had been him. That she really did love him but that she didn't want a boyfriend. But even she felt that this was a thin excuse.
Kieran seemed to know and understand without further need to explain. He surprised her by saying, "You prefer girls don't you."
Gabby was shocked, she searched his face in the gloom and could see he was compassionate and not judging, she decided to trust him, "Yes. Yes, I do. But you won't say anything to anyone will you?"
"Of course I won't. Jesus Gabbs, how many times do I have to tell you I love you. I would never hurt you. I think I just somehow knew."
"You think I'm a freak."
"I don't, no way," he protested. Then added mischievously, "I think it's hot."
Gabby whacked his shoulder and scolded, "You pig. Typical male reaction. Just once..."
"Gabby, Gabby, stop, stop," he did his best to interrupt her rant. She paused and he added, "I love you," emphasising these words. "I love you, who you are. You are beautiful and I want you in my life. If not as my girl, then my friend. I will never embarrass you or hurt you."
"I know," Gabby replied meekly and smiled at him. But then the urge to joke overwhelmed her and she added in a heavily serious tone, "But you do embarrass me," she paused for effect, "Every time you dance with me."
"Shut up." He was laughing, glad the tension was broken. "Here I am being nice and you mock me."
"Dances just like a chicken. Bwouk bwouk, I never know where to look. It's mortifying." She pressed her advantage to the full.
They cuddled a while longer, talking quietly and reassuring one another a final time. She smiled to herself that she was no longer a virgin, she had achieved her summer plan to experience sex with a boy. She had done it and it was a happy experience. It seemed right to her that it should be Kieran. He was the only boy she had ever been intimate with. She was happy that it was him.
Minutes later she was crawling out of the tent and heading off in search of Mary. It felt perfect that she had lost her virginity. She wanted to confess to Mary. She knew she still loved Mary. She understood that Mary had been excited at maybe getting with Finn. She felt she understood now that she had been with Kieran. However, she also knew in her heart that it was probably the one and only time a cock would be inside her. She knew now it was only girls that could really turn her on.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoPlease i need more chapter on this, i really want to know how it played out between mary and Gabby and also would really like a happy ending.....nice work
Reesertonabout 2 years agoYou see the train wreck happening but there’s nothing you can do to prevent it…
Anonymousover 2 years agoNo Mary? No thanks. Gabby is more likable, but any character is only as likable as the author allows. Why can't Mary grow? This chapter was a mess. The relationship between those two was what made this tale interesting. Molly, Emily and the boys are just poorly drawn distractions. I don't think either character works without the other. Please keep them together and have them work to repair and strengthen what they have.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI enjoyed this chapter. It got a little dicey there for a minute with Kieran but the recovery was nice. I was kind of hoping that when Kieran was saying he 'loved her even as a friend, which means he would never want to hurt her', that she would let that sink in and realize that Mary isn't really that great but.... meh.
I would definitely like to see a Gabby-Molly thing happen but a work experience crush would be cool too! At this point the whole Mary thing is slowly becoming a toxic cycle I feel. I think Mary has some growing up to do before they can become an actual thing, if they do become one at all (It is called "My BFF is a lesbian", but it doesn't say I married her or anything 😉). Honestly I think she as to grow a person for them to even remain friends at this point
Patchworkover 2 years agoAuthorThank you all for your continued interest in this story. I acknowledge that the last episode introduced some unexpected and ill-judged directions. I wanted this to be a launching-off point for the character of Gabby, whom I see as the more likeable. I saw the twist at the party as typical teenage curiosity and tried to handle the Kieran encounter as a kind of closure on Gabby's first fumbling explorations and her emerging confidence in her lesbian identity. She has feelings for Kieran, and he is good at heart, but she wants nothing more from their relationship than his friendship. I had planned to deal with Gabby's hurt feelings and see her move on as a fully identifying lesbian. I planned to avoid any connection with Emily but had ideas for a new crush with someone she meets during her work experience. I also wanted to prepare her for her university life. But I appreciate that readers were enjoying the Mary-Gabby dynamic and want that to continue. I will reflect and see how I can re-build the core story. But please do let me know what you would like to see in the comments here. Thank you all once again for your interest and feedback.
gopherdudeover 2 years agoThis chapter was disappointing. It took such an odd turn after a good start. I liked the continuation with Molly and the tease that the story might take an arc that would have Mary and Gabby explore being "dirty" together. However, everything after that just seemed... off? Mary's cruel disregard for Gabby's feelings, the way she just callously dismissed Gabby in favor of a hookup with Finn and how easily she just pushed her towards Molly was confusing. Their relationship as BFFs and lovers seemed more substantial than that. Having Gabby fuck a guy? Wtf? By this point, she has embraced being a lesbian and hasn't expressed any interest in a cock since doing so. Suddenly having sex with Kieran seems out of character and comes out of nowhere. It would have made more sense to have her hookup with Molly and then delve into the consequences of her and Mary's actions.
You stated in a response to comments that you wanted to focus on Gabby and have her move on from Mary but this just seems counter to this story. The title, "My BFF is a Lesbian", insinuates a story that follows Mary AND Gabby as they comes to grips with Gabby's sexuality (and eventually Marys?) and their feelings towards each other. Phasing out Mary and focusing on Gabby seems like such an abrupt departure from that and a missed opportunity. We have watched Mary progress from being hesitant and unsure to loving Gabby as more than just a BFF and welcoming their sexual relationship. With her not having bought into the whole lesbian thing yet and her desire to experience sex with a guy, an arc that has Mary breaking away from Gabby and exploring her hetero side while Gabby moves on with Molly or others could be interesting. Have Gabby hook up with Emily during the work thing now that she and Mary are on different paths? Explore how this strains/ruins their friendship and how Mary begins to realize who she is and what she really wants and what she so callously tossed away?
There are many interesting arcs this story could take but no matter what avenue you pursue, Mary needs to play an integral role. This is her and Gabby's story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next installment.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoAgreed. What the hell happened to Mary!? I'm glad you didn't do the mother thing, but what's up with the guys? Please fix.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI liked this story very much however, I have to agree that this last chapter was way off track. Having these young ladies get with guys is out of character as previously developed. It seems that the chapter should have concentrated on Gabby and Molly's relationship and left Mary out of the picture. Regarding Emily, I think that a solid chapter with Emily showing more interest in Gabby to the point of Gabby taking Emily to bed for some steamy sex with Emily showing Gabby many tricks that she can use with Molly and maybe other girls that Gabby seduces. Gabby could also find out in later chapters that Molly is actually having sex with one of the nuns or a teacher. Many ways to go, but do keep the story of Molly alive for many, many more chapters. It's simply lovely up to the last chapter. Write more lesbian scenes.
