All Comments on 'My Birthday'

more of this story please.

Amazing story

You write so wonderful

What a wonderful story, well written and very, very erotic. I loved every word. Write more, or else!

Impressive! Thanks for sharing it.

Loved it. More like please.

Good story until the girlfriend gets involved

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Great for only your third story! I have to admit I was hoping Dan was Linda's only birthday present. I really wish you would have continued, there is so much yet to be done!

That was a truly great story!!