All Comments on 'My Black Babies Ch. 08'

23 men and 5 women. In one night. Think about that. At even 20 mins a shot, you’re looking at over 9 hours straight. No breaks, no pee breaks, no water breaks. 9 hours and that’s only if they go once each.

Then there is the bullshit about not having sex with his wife. Then why stay married? Honest question: why stay married to someone you don’t get to have sex with? It doesn’t make sense.

Basic biology says white women cannot have black kids, only bi-racial. How hard is that to figure out? Secondly, if anybody fucked like this they'd be dead from STD's. These stories are beyond terrible on so many levels.

You should try writing some gay stories since you are obviously a gay sissy bottom slut.

I thought this story is about being breed by a black man to have his baby. Or having white wifea being breed by black men. This story lost it way. It about how black men like turning white wife into sluts for black men and they don't have to worry about if they produce children.

DEAR AUTHOR, well. Just too much. Too many characters. People doing things for no rhyme nor reason. Just too much. Quality of sex / LITEROTICA standards not met. Just too all over the place. And, yeah LIFTING the FICTION DEFINITION, I find this story line too insulting. You can do and have done better. Are the EDITORS asleep ? 5 STARS.

I don’t understand why people read a multiple part story and bitch about how long it is. This isn’t a literary society post.

This story started out good, but it got lost along the way. Too many characters and there really was no ending that tied it all together.

This story is great! I'm personally refreshing on the daily to read how and where things transpire.