All Comments on 'My Blue Angel'

Very average story. AA+++

Sick fuck, what a life, insane she will repeat her act till death/it will get a lot worse (The female change issue watch)!

Disturbing to say the least.

For myself I’d choose calling her cell & telling her it was over & why. I couldn’t remain married to her.

God! I’m glad this never happened to me!

A 5 for a great setting & story.

But I dislike cucks!

Bill S.

It wasn't the first time and he should have called and told her friend in Nashville what he thought her interference

Strange that she was not pulled up for her public exhibition of being on the boat and was being able to be seen by the world. He should have rubbed it in that she may well be on countless web sites by now. I would have also added that Margie was spoken to and given the 'riot act'. The problem is trust, she met the male and then went to see him. She should have thought about it making the decision to stop it. Going after that means she is a devious person.

You can just feel the love oozing out of her, what has her numerous affairs got to do with her overwhelming love and respect for her husband.

Here we have the archetypal married couple, one is delusional and the other is a moron, you can decide which is which.

Possible outcome. My wife cheated for a bit about 18 yrs. ago, but I won and now its 29 yrs. and just as good as year 1.

After just reading a BTB story this one was a real letdown. Just 1 🌟 from me.

What a wimp!

Of course if it were my wife I might have a different opinion.

After 50+ years forgiveness might win out.

Bill S.

You can't ever trust a cunt like this...

I would have taken a different tack. First in would not have been binoculars but a telescope connected to a computer. Pictures are taken and emailed. They are saved down so they could be sent from a mobile phone. He phones Nashville/Margie and asks for his wife to either phone from Margie's mobile phone or a land line if she has one. When she cannot of course, he sends a text with a picture to his wife wit the word 'Explain'. His wife then has to hot foot it back home by passing Nashville. He phones Margie and give her five verbals from hell and tells her what he thinks of her and tells her to keep her skanky body and mind away from his wife. He gets all the gory details from his wife. He divorces his wife but remarries her once it has got finalised to make her understand its a new contract. Thus I feel the story could have been better. The plot is really good.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

Damn, you wrote about a husband who was actually an adult, instead of a hurt little boy who runs away.

"I was feeling surprisingly optimistic about my marriage. Maybe part of it was just a certain degree of maturity; at 41 my response to her adultery was more than just the blind rage I might have felt at 25. Like I told you back at the beginning of this, I know that Carrie loves me. She's messed-up, but she loves me. So if we can do something about the messed-up part, maybe we'll make it."

Not maturity. He's prematurely aged into a weak, needy, unprincipled demi-man. Yeah, as written, she really looooves him. Not one episode, but three that she mentioned, along with prior resolutions to stop. Ah, but the magic counselor will fix her? ! God what a stupid superstition, and what an inane weak story.

Dump the bitch. Can't be trusted

Two wrongs don’t make a right. When he called Stephany for a booty call, he was no better than Carrie. He should have kicked her cheating lying ass to the curb. He should have given Margie some form of humiliating pay back and he should have taken a baseball bat to Roger. Roger knew she was married and he still pursued her, what a total jerk.

I don't understand why, in a situation like this one, Jack does not insist in a post-nup. That is the only thing, that might ensure no further straying by Carrie.

Really surprised on the phone call to his wife he didn't tell her "I know what you are doing. Come back now or it's over." Instead he calmly lets her finish the week with Roger and has sex with Stephanie and has the PI report. Cool customer I guess. I couldn't do that.

I know you're going to garner a lot of "cuck screamers" with this story but I found it refreshing and interesting.

Second time through and I don't see why he would choose to stay with her. She's cheated three times, by her own admission, he caught her once. He has a great replacement waiting for him to leave her, there's no guarantee that the wife won't cheat again. So why stay with her? Love can't fix the loss of trust and there was nothing said within the story that would make us believe she will live up to her promises.

What a fucking Joke and not in a Haha way just truly Pathetic but for this author par for the course

Well done.

Meanwhile the womanizer, the helper friend and the cheater lives to laugh towards the stupidity of a long time cuck/wimp.

The writing was good but the story was probably one of your lamest I have read.

You did get some kudos from dress wearing cuck story lovers but other than that and a few who swallow any RAAC, and this was one of those, with no redeeming reasons for it to end that way, few should like it. And I am a guy that doesnt mind a RAAC just not a fan of weak stories that really only have a different ending based on what was given us.

This story is among your best.

Everybody makes mistakes.

It's how, and why their made that determines the outcome.

Moral of the story has Maria.

She did all she could to avoid and resist BIL.

She was raised in the aftermath of Adultery.

She was seduced and dominated and didn't have a chance.

She absolutely deserved a second chance.

Second nightmare had a complete narcissist.

She only thought of herself.

When it all fell apart, suddenly, she remembered the guy she shit on.

She got exactly what she deserved.

In this tale, Carrie got off easy.

The story, the characters, the plot, all were absolutely brilliant!!!

The dialogue, is probably the most real, funniest, well written I've ever read on LIT.

Keeping her in suspense about Stephanie, is delicious.

The dialogue alone brings you back again, and again.

Outstanding!!!

I fully appreciate that you reconcile when you deem it appropriate.

At least most of the time.

Maria deserves a second chance.

Is there an author who writes more nothing stories than this one?.

Absolutely no point to this story just dribble⭐️

Top story. Top writer.

A rich cuck this time who chooses cuckhood. Just like shooing lost sheep back through the fence and into the pen. Hmmm. How effing jaded can you get? Even though the cheater gets away with it and will certainly do it again, femdom is not gonna like this version.

Apparently the weasel guy, HighBrow, nitpic, etc., who contribute nothing to this site (other than useless negative comments) don’t really understand fiction. Until they start writing their own stories, they might consider withholding negative comments on stories by a talented and prolific writer such as ohio. Many readers appreciate ohio even when they aren’t wearing dresses…but simply enjoying reading a well-written (and free) story. How stupid can one reader be to comment that ohio writes a lot of “nothing” stories? No one is forcing you to keep reading his stories, knucklehead.

It was one of the better reconciliation stories in that he at least had the balls to get some strange himself to even the score rather than the typical RAAC crap that is loved by the sissy crowd.

I'd normally HATE this sort of, very logical, but, what... immoral conclusion/resolution? Somehow you have found the excruciatingly delicate balance to make it seem, uh, workable to normal sensibilities.

[16.06.23]

Excellente!

Love this part (as a Letterman fan):

"You know what?" I said to her around midnight, when we were sleepily half-watching Letterman. "I'm having a really good time!"

11/10!!!!!

Well written but truly not a believable beginning because of his initial reactions and response..Come on Ohio,get more realistic . A real husband would have reacted by hunting down the boat and addressed the situation. Or the minimum of phoning or texting her saying something like "nice boat,entertaining fucking,Don't come home".By not doing that in your story you lost a lot of backing for your MC.

Unfortunately as much as i like most of your writing you tend to do that with many of your male MCs and stories...still you get 4 stars for a good tale..JZK

who ever told you that you can write lied. lit reakky needs a ignore author feature..

Umm no. Just plain no. His wife went from. Two one night stands enabled by her friend Margie, to a full blown affair with emotional buildup, the lunches and kissing and planning, to a four day f$ckfest in Florida with the asshole with the boat. And worse her husband witnessed some of it and knew what she was doing the rest of the time in Florida with the PI reports. She was flat out living and dating the guy. The idea that there was no romance and it was just sex is laughable. Maybe with the two one night stands, but not this time. Compare this yo the wife in Her Bkue Minivan by the same author. There too I believe that divorce was the only viable path, but at least that wife tried. She was really remorseful and had a mental issue, being obsessed with kinky sex, and worked hard at therapy to find out why and how to solve that. She owned up to what she did and seemed to really change. That husband did not accept what she had done, refused to go to counseling, and while he appreciated the efforts she made, he realized he didn't want to be with her anymore and chose divorce, breaking her heart, but it was the right move for him. This wife is an admitted slut. And yet the husband here basically just accepts it, somehow knowing she still loves him, and then starts revenge shagging with Stephanie, who offered herself a couple years ago. Huh? I cannot believe his initial reaction was to do.nothing except to call Margie. I cannot believe when his wife called, he didn't tell her to enjoy her time in Florida on the boat and not come home. The kid are grown up and not even hers. He doesn't need evidence for a.no fault divorce. He can still have the PI investigate the new guy and the timing, etc. But really? Just decide to probably accept it, get a bit of revenge and hot sex.and wait till she gets back. Letting her complete her f$ckfest holiday? Wtf? He could have at least put the fear of God in ger, and then let he race home, and still spend his time with Stephanie. Please. This wife is nowhere near some of the others on her whether it is the one time limerence in "Innocent Question", the messed up beauty with Daddy issues in "I Hate Surprises", or Irina in "My Irina", who was basically raped, with a husband more interested in first in revenge than in consoling his wife (he was great all the way up until he was an asshole and got his head out if his ass). So no. Just no. Let Carrie go and move on. She can go join the wife, Julie, turned slut twice for her young hot boytoy in "Looking Right at It", who btw got forgiven, also after revenge sex. Sigh.

And the divorce was finalized 7 months later. The end.

Originally gave this 3/5. But on rereading it it really is fucked up bullshit.

Changed my score to 2/5 because of the rubbish subject matter.

You kept the two because it was well written

2/5

I always liked this story... and I still do.

I liked Stephanie more :(

I can maybe see him not being too upset at the cheating, but what about the lying?

\

"Stephanie Prince was a tall, extremely hot red-head" and she's going through "one hell of a dry spell?"

I thought Ohio was one of the better writers, but this was a ridiculous waste of effort. The dude travels from Charlette NC to Florida and while talking to his eighty year old uncle who happens to live on a waterfront property and happens to be looking through binoculars at the boats passing his property trying to spot naked boobies. He succeeds and hands the binoculars to his nephew who at that moment sees his wife fucking some guy while floating down the river maybe 800 miles from their home. (what are the freaking odds of that). Tooooo stupid. Then, the women who says, out of the blue, "Jack, will you do me a favor and fuck my brains out". Who writes shit like that? Damn this is an embarrassment for a writer of Ohio's caliber. 2/5.

Oh you poor bastard

So that's it?

I have to disagree with some of the naysayers, fiction is all about making bizarre coincidences come to pass.

I remember going on holiday as a kid and always thinking it was strange that I'd meet people from my home town, less strange once I'd grown up and realised that travel agents sell holiday packages and choice isn't as free as one would think.

But then as an adult randomly going somewhere far away only to run into someone I knew from school.

Point being is that such things happen all the time, and it only takes one of them to be more significant for a story to become interesting. The sad underlying truth here is that people if similar backgrounds are attracted to the same places like flies to shit.

3 Stars on this story . So his wife cheats with 3 guys and he stays with her .. I would leave her for the hot red head . Make sure you get tested for STD's and she will make your daughter really proud ,. I bet your daughter will have 3 boyfriends at the same time in high school

Why are so many of the wives in these stories very damaged women whose coping mechanism for whatever ails them is to spread their legs for whatever guy takes their fancy? Would be nice if we could get some more down-to-earth women, though I suppose the stories would be harder to write.

She says she's slept with numerous guys while being married, all under the guise of her visiting her friend, which she did at 1st. At their meeting, he tells her there's 3 options, of which 1 was dismissed. Then he names 3!! Why, after all she did, would he even want to stay with her & continue their marriage? She cheated almost every time she was away, & probably will do so again.

He should get himself tested for any STDs whether or not she does. But on the same token, throw her ass out, for the line of her cheating &.... Ohio made this husband an absolute spineless wimp. After breakfast & confronting her, any man would tell her to sleep in a spare bedroom or couch for a few days while looking for a place to stay. Not this guy! For that, 1 star. Bob

Regarding her time with Roger: I’ve traveled all over the world, as have many of my colleagues and business associates, and every one of us have informed our SO’s when we were traveling and when we had arrived at our destinations. So I’m puzzled why the author, Ohio, did not have the OP call Carrie and inform her that he was traveling to Miami on business. Granted, he had no idea she was already there, but it’s common courtesy and a show of love to inform your SO when you’re traveling in case something happens and they need to get a hold of you. Obviously this would have warned Carrie that there was a slim chance she’d run into her husband but very slim. The only answer I can come up with as to why Ohio ignored this piece of common communication between a husband and wife, is because it might’ve thrown a wrench into Carrie’s plans and destroyed the crisis element of his story.

The way I see it however, is if Ohio had included that courtesy, it’s possible that it would’ve increased the level of intrigue in his story. Would Carrie take the chance that she could cheat on her husband right under his nose, so to speak, and get away with it? Since she didn’t know about Uncle Tony, she probably would have anyway.

Why does love "BS" always to enter into the topic, we EVEN expect more from a Girl friend not with a wife we plan on sharing a family and life with. It is not that hard to stay faithful I found it was always easy and seeing other indulge in there lustful cheating I was always amazed at those men's ability to stay numb and out of touch. I never kept them as friends I lost respect for them . If I heard them talking about their exploits I just walked away.

Nope. Not one of your better ones. Who’s dumb enough to have sex with his wife after she comes back from her trysts? Who’s foolish and a moron to not divorce after she cheated 3 different times? Just doesn’t make sense. The wife you put in this story would keep cheating. She likes it and it’s part of her DNA. Disappointed

Sorry, I don't see a lot of hope here. Neither of these people is ready or willing to do what it will take, or forego what they will need to, to make this marriage viable.

The while dialog and reconciliation after the reveal cane off as robotic. 4 stars (tops).

Who the hell would put up with this shit? Why would you keep her? How do you ever trust a faithless bitch like this ever again?

How is this a "better to keep her" situation?

I'm sure he has a prenupt to protect his business and assets. He has proof she cheated.

He cuts her loose. And gets on with life.

And his life would be pretty fucking good.

Maybe with Stephanie? Who wouldn't like a long legged red head who fucks your brains out?

Or maybe with someone (or a bunch of other someones) else?

Sorry. I just don't get it. You catch a spouse cold hearted cheating? Lies to you?

All my love would die right there. Done. Betrayal. Over. Why try and resurrect something that died already?

Just don't get it.

3 Stars from GW on this one . Kick her cheating ass to the curb . Also good luck with the STD's

So, you totally crash your car and rather than get a shiny, new one you've always wanted to drive, you opt for the more expensive, time consuming, difficult option of completely rebuilding the old one, knowing that as a major wreck part of its value is gone forever while hoping that the numerous repairs hold???

Is that what you'd really do? I seriously doubt it.

PS did wifey ever bounce as enthusiastically on MC's dick as on Roger's? I doubt that also.

Enjoy that image forever, wondering all the time if she just cheated smarter.

After all, look how many YEARS it took MC to find out, and then only by a stroke of luck.

Promiscuous woman when single continues being promiscuous after marriage, sap takes her back. Alpha fux, beta bux.

I can see why this was dedicated to the cuck king himself Hardaysknight.

I see there's a distinct pattern to your stories and it's not for me.

What the actual fuck?

Commenter Desecration has it right. Promiscuous before usually means promiscuous after. One time may be forgivable but only a fool stays with a serial philanderer. This fictional wife did not deserve his forgiveness, and hadn't a prayer of keeping her promise of future fidelity.