All Comments on 'My Breakthrough Movie'

I wish Sean and Jess a loving and fulfilling life and marriage! Can this evolve into a Joanie redux? Or is it just a one-off? A delightful story! A wonderful combination! Sex and romance! How could I do anything but to rate it 5 stars as I did? Great story, JB.

I knew it’d be a mistake to open this at work because I knew I’d have to read it through to the end! You sure know how to write a perfect sexy world! Nice work ! X

I really like this story. It meandered a bit and was repetitive at times, but it was cute and quirky with hot sex scenes too. The casual style of the prose melded well with the main character’s stumble thru life and into a pot of gold. No doubt her father and brothers rubbed one out watching her sex tape. Well done!

Great story in METOO time. As a girl myself, I knew that most of us has some of these slutness inside us. Reluctant slut is a good story line. Hope you write more.

Absolutely charming and funny. Not terribly arousing. However, in the end, much better and much much funnier

Another superb story JB.

Was Jess based on anyone in particular I wonder ?

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