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Click hereI speed down the fairway like a crazy person, glancing at my mirrors and shifting into second and then third, speeding my way past my family. Then as the corner approaches I clutch kick as I over-steer around the corner, the rear slip axle to my Trans Am exceeding the front slip angle to such an extent that the front wheels are pointing in the opposite direction! We drift, my car and I, all the way around the corner and then some until the smoke show is impossible to see through and I brake abruptly, panting.
"Is she ok?" Shawn is visibly worried, Charles Jaxton pats him on the back.
"She's great Shawn. Don't you worry."
And then they hear me screaming my fool head off and laughing like crazy.
Charles steals a glance at Shawn who's smile is infectious as always.
'He's a good looking boy that one. They'd make beautiful kids.' Charles smiles to himself and throws an arm over his son and Shawn and marches them over to where I am sitting in my dream car, grinning ear to ear as the sea breeze comes through and pushes the smoke away from the road.
"DAD! DID YOU FUCKING SEE THAT!?" I yell, throwing the door open and running into my fathers' arms.
"Your mom would snap if she heard that language coming from you young lady!" Dad warns. But then he laughs, seeing my face fall slightly. "I fucking saw that Feline. I FUCKING SAW MY DAUGHTER DRIFT THAT BEAST LIKE IT WAS HER BITCH!" and he high fives me.
Pat and Shawn exchange looks and break into full blown laughter.
"That. Was. Crazy. Cat!" Pat lifts me into the air. "And the champion, weighing in at 5 and a half pounds..."
"PAT!" I laugh slapping at his shoulders.
"FELINE JAXTON!!!!!!" He shouts and lays two kisses on my cheek, placing me on my feet. "Seriously sis.....that was fucking fire."
Shawn is nodding vigorously.
"I don't even know what to say...my girlfriend is a race car driver?" he rubs his chin methodically, stubble now starting to appear after a day of not shaving. It's white blonde. Like his hair.
I laugh. "No. No I'm not. THOSE guys are crazy!" I say.
"You, YOU'RE crazy Feline!" Shawn takes my hands and laces his fingers with mine. "I've never seen a girl do something like that!"
I stand there, wishing he would kiss me, but I know he's being respectful in front of my family. Instead he steps into my arms and we hug. I sneak a look up at him before burying my face in his chest.
Dad and Pat look at each other and smile.
"Honestly, I was going to ask her if she'd go on a date with the poor guy myself if he didn't ask her this summer." Pat whispers over at Dad. "I'd have to go through our first REAL year of medical school with him pining over her. Insufferable."
Dad looks at Pat and gives him an incredulous look of surprise.
"You knew? How long?" Dad whispers.
"Shit Pops...At least 5 years."
"I figured it out before you." Dad says, all proud of himself. "When she was 13 and you guys were 17."
"Dad," I mutter, from Shawn's embrace. "We're right here yunno."
Soon I'm in a group hug, feeling very teeny, as Shawn called me, with three, tall, strong men laughing their asses off. And me in the middle. Short, pale me. Beaming with total joy.
This is the best goddamn day of my life!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoReally love this story! I have read all the chapters and can't wait for more.
One small nitpick, in this sentence on the first page of this story
"Shit, we probably know him as well as our own son, Patrick, at this point."
I feel like it should be either "... as well as our own son... " or "... as well as Patrick..." having both feels weirdly unnatural and really brought me out of the story for some reason.
Really really loving your style though, can't wait to read more!
LV4206over 2 years agoAuthorby fixer43
Don't visit First Time too often, had to go back and read that one first. Enjoyed them both, maybe a continuation after Shawn goes back to med school and Feline goes to college/trade school?
One nit-pick on the car side. 800 rpm is just above idle; dump the clutch and it will stall. If you meant 8000 rpm, that is a bit high for street Detroit iron. Somewhere around 4000 is probably more like it.
=========> Commenters here are the best. You guys are so helpful. I appreciate you all so much. Thank you! For the nit-pick. I appreciate it because it's free help! Yes, I meant 8000. I made so many typos. I think maybe at this point I need an editor. Heh. Anyways, I was thinking that was probably too high. Especially because most of the research I did on drifting was with the conventional drifting cars: BMW's,Honda's, Nissan's, Lexus. It was exceedingly difficult to find muscle car drifting descriptions. Although I did find a couple. So at least I knew that black beast was actually capable. So I don't make 6'5 gymnast mistakes again. I'm committed to the idea though so, full steam ahead. Lol (stubborn that's what that is) street Detroit iron. I really dig that. That sounds sexy a.f. I love Detroit. Been to Packard Plant lots. It's probably my most favourite place I've ever been to, Detroit. For a myriad of reasons. Come back next week chapter 3 will hopefully be approved. I'm just about to submit it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
LV4206over 2 years agoAuthorAnonymous
Check your arithmatic too.
13+5 = 18
18-at least 5 = <13
So Dad didn’t figure it out first.
========> Thanks for your help friend! This is the scenario I envisioned: Dad did figure it out. Just barely. Shawn's older than Feline by 4 and a half years. Pat is older than Shawn by a month. Feline had just turned 13 and started developing quickly, if you catch my meaning. ;) Dad noticed Shawn noticing. ;) Shawn would be 17 and a half. Probably a year later. When Shawn was 18 and some and Feline was 13 about to turn 14 is when brother Pat started noticing Shawn checking out his sister. If anything, Pat's math is off. Off by about 6 months. ;) ;) thank you so much for reading! (Yes I am totally blaming my shite math skills on a fictional character.)
RedMockers
Best damn story. I've been reading Literotica for 20 years. I got to the end of this chapter and muttered, "Don't end yet!" I'd read a whole book about these people.
==========>For real? That is so flattering and feels amazing to read! I'm really honored you'd say that! That's the best compliment, that you didn't want the chapter to end! And that you'd want to read a whole book?!? Well, I was actually really wanting to do that! I've got 5 chapters in total written so far. And so many other fun and sexy ideas! I want to keep going. I'm editing chap 3 today and submitting tomorrow. Stay tuned. I've been here about that long as well! I love this place. I decided to make a user profile, finally, last year. Thank you so much again! Serious, it means a lot.
Anonymous
Awesome story, more chapters to come hopefully!
=========> You bet Anon. And thank you so dang much! Wow! Awesome?? That's a pretty great compliment. Thank you! Thank you! 5 chapters are written so far. I am currently editing chapter 3. It will be submitted here, tomorrow. It took about 5 days, each time, for the last two chapters to be approved. So with any luck chapter three will be up by Wednesday December 1.
fixer43over 2 years agoDon't visit First Time too often, had to go back and read that one first. Enjoyed them both, maybe a continuation after Shawn goes back to med school and Feline goes to college/trade school?
One nit-pick on the car side. 800 rpm is just above idle; dump the clutch and it will stall. If you meant 8000 rpm, that is a bit high for street Detroit iron. Somewhere around 4000 is probably more like it.
