All Comments on 'My Cheating Wife'

so the cuck left for a few hours and came back right?

So, this was part one, right? Another chapter tomorrow? Hello...?

Nothing happening here citizens… move on.

3 stars

A

Is there a second paragraph to the story?

kinda short. but powerful.

It isn't always the pussy that betrays you. one up for this story!

Rubbish

Is THAT even 750 words?

Needs a part 2 so we get to read the dumb bitches reaction when she finds out how stupid she was.

U have the absolutely correct name…HOGHEAD… can u make it better by changing it to SWINESWILL?

Sorry, it seems incomplete.

I wonder if Ken will take care of her!

4

Not a full story

And then…what???

It wasn’t tagged as a 750 word project but as that’s the minimum Literotica accepts there must have been at least that many words.

Not a story, nor an anecdote, can’t even call it as a vignette, it would be a struggle to describe this as just a random thought that took up half a post-it note.

For an author who is attempting to create a multi-chapter magnum opus with DILLIGAF this was painfully brief and said absolutely nothing.

And……?

...headed to Ken's place...?

Next chapter?

Nice set up. Do you plan on finishing it?

Good start now finish the story.

What can you say, same old story, a start maybe but trash as it is

The ending was f….ked

He should have put his hands around her slutty neck...

ONLY 4 STARS BECAUSE THERE IS NO ENDING. SORRY!

Great potential, just not enough meat on the bones. No resolution, just leaves you hanging and let disappointed.

Where’s the story?

Full marks for walking away. However the better solution is to kick her out of the house send her to "Ken.." let him deal with her.

What did you think of this story?

What story?

And then ???

only an intro to a story, don't leave it here.

No story just a statement.

... Seriously question, author: where's the story?

Needs part 2

I thought it had good potential, but it was not developed. It was too short and the ending was incomplete and disappointing.

I hope the author or another Literotica writer will take this idea and develop the story more.

Not a flash story , just a half story. Now finish it taking care of Ken and absolutely destroying one 20 year wife.

Don't start a story if you aren't going to finish it.

Good fast reading story. NICE……

She "ken" just go piss up a rope now... BTB

Ken is in trouble

So she called out the wrong name, that doesn’t mean she is cheating. If anything, his reaction says more about him than her.

It was the start of a good story.

Crap! Not even enough for a part 1.

no story?

750 tease, and not very satisfying.

Finish it are don't start it

Oopsie!

One star for no ending. You've done the easy part, setting things up. You skipped the hard part, the confrontation, the resolution.

good strategy

no mess, no one killed

just dumped the stupid cheating spouse

and move on.

Most 750 word projects are fine with where they left off even though I would like some of them to continue. Your story, on the other hand, is a huge tease that I wish you would write more to.

Nice and to the point.

A follow-up would be appreciated.

And that's all?

What story?

Is this a one and done or are there other parts?

Well, the story started but stopped.

Not a story, only a premise.

Great start to a story

And that's it? A lot left to do with it.

If there was ever a story that needed more, this us it.

Been there done that. We patched things up. It was tough but we made it and I'm glade.

Please finish. Is he going to give Ken a beat down?

So much promise. So little delivered. What a disappointment.

Just another weak 750 word waste of time. Congratulations on your story about nothing.

It's a good start. If it was tagged as a 750 word entry, I wouldn't like it but could accept where you ended it. As a story without length restrictions, it just feels incomplete.

I like how this was going. Please tell me you’re going to continue this I want to see where this goes. Is he heading the Kens house to get his pound of flesh. Please don’t leave us hanging

Is there more? Is he going to kick Ken's ass or see his wife? Good start though, just needs an end.

Could be a great story. But there is nothing written here but a plot idea. Sad as a well written plot idea.

Need a follow up, I want to see him get revenge.

Let’s finish the story. The aftermath, please.

Are you crazy? This isn't a story. It's a head-on collision into a stone wall!

Where"s the story?????

needs another chapter.mahem on ken nasty ending for her!

Great start

The Ken should have pumped him up to say "I am reclaiming you!"

this is so not finished! 3 stars for an unfinished story. there needs to be way more, like the fallout and what will happen to their marriage. why she did it, how long, and so forth.

Dumb bitch.

Hope she likes being divorced.

They sell the house. Split proceeds. He leaves town and she never sees him again.

After sleeping around for a couple of years she gets the reputation as the town bicycle.

She ends up old and alone with 12 cats.

Okay for what there was of it. But you left off the most interesting parts where there's a confrontation, some unclever yelling and cursing, some planning (or not), a lot of begging, maybe some revenge, some lawsuits, a divorce, or maybe a permanent trip to a strange land. You get the picture. Unfinished in my estimation.

Too short

Incomplete. Is there a 2nd part?

Some readers would say this story is unfinished. They are wrong and lack comprehension. What is left to say? Is the marriage over? Yes. Does he want or need evidence, an explanation? No. Short and sweet. One and done. I like that. Some will say it isn't erotic. Fair assessment. Doesn't detract from the story though. *****

It's not even half a story

Hope there is an ending coming, otherwise this is just another crap story. FTDS

Even though you have the prerogative to end it here, you could also have a part 2. This could go in so many different directions. Thanks for the story!

Not bad but too short. ****

A real story has a beginning a middle and an end. This only had a beginning and since I dont see a part 1 in the title I guess you just got tired writing......

Too damn short. Just the beginning of a story. Actually, probably the middle of a story.

You had the beginning of an intriguing story. Finish it.

Hooked

Not really even the beginning of a story. Just the start of a beginning. Not sure if you plan to continue it or not, but it was the wrong amount to post.

Hope that's not it. 🙁

Okay start. Familiar theme. I hope you're going to follow-up with a different finale.

Kurmugin

I must be loosing my mind or I am clairvoyant!! I swear I read the exact same story several days ago!!! Also FINISH the story. The MC left THEN WHAT??

And then……,? 3*

Incomplete

Needs an ending. Was going along well and then fell off the cliff.

Unfinished 2*

Sometimes words aren't necessary. Not erotic but at least it isn't pathetic incel porn like that other bullshit story

And not finished. A good start needs a good finish.

Surely you aren't leaving it hanging like this. Also you stopped far too short for even a ch01 of a story. On the plus side, you have a great start--do something with it.

It ended when it just started....

Sparse in detail but otherwise a good beginning.

However--this story leaves the reader (at least this one) quite dissatisfied with the ending. As one accomplished writer on this site keeps saying...

FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

(Please.)

MLJ

Unfinished.

Liked it.