by CindyTV
"...I love it when a plan comes together..."
Hannibal Smith, the A-Team.
Five * * * * * !
Great BURN. Thanks for writing. Can hardly wait for second chapter on how the body builder is dealt with.
Oh my, more scribblings from the wonderful mind of miss Cindy makes me a happy reader!
Love these drive by stories. Someone always gets what they deserve. Always a fan 5&FAV
Always great and entertaining stories. I look forward to seeing more.
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Why pay to put cameras in his apartment if he already had them in his house and had his proof?
@BH76 Elementary my dear BH, he wanted to burn her in real time, and end the fiasco, once a happy marriage, without lies or the standard cliche's from the cheater.
I want to know what he has planned for Bigus Dickus (you Monty Python fans are welcome).
For a short story, it was enjoyably complete. I enjoy reading your writings.
It would be foolish to let it be known he arranged for breaking and entering as well as privacy violation and admitting it! Not smart
Very well done, even if I prefer longer stories where characters are well defined and the plot is released progressively, this story is very enjoyable.
Nice story Cindy! I'm surprised though that you write so much about cheating wives. Never did get that story you said you'd send me, oh well. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks for the story, well written, you get better with each submission.
As he already had cctv from his own home why the shenanigans with breaking in to the apartment and placing illegal cameras. Just padding out your story. Otherwise good.
Nice 'Disney for Dudes' fantasy! Illegal cameras, illegal posting of pics on social media: this guy's going to be paying her a bundle.
I always love your stories. Keep up the good work. A smile first thing in the morning.
He should not have divulge the vameras in the lover's house. It would have been more fun and legal to let her answer the door get her served while still conversing with her on the phone. If she had an ounce of intelligence she would realize her cheating is busted and the marriage is done then hubby gets to laugh the last laugh.
No much smart to tell them about the illegal video-cameras in the lover's apartment. Anyway, 5 stars for another rare real BTB (not the fake ones, that are just BurnTheBastard, without touching the slut wife).
I would have preferred it to be a bit longer but I still liked it. I would have liked the whore begging in vain. Thanks for another great story with no consenting cuckolds, unbelievable reconciliations or sluts getting away with their slutty ways. THANKS.
Wonder story, 10 stars! Cheating HO got hers! Now studly will probably drop her and she'll have to work, maybe as an adult actress! Maybe her stud will join her! Keep writing, Cindy Boo!
He didn’t burn her or her lover close to enough. We have no idea how the boyfriend is going to react when her clothing and possessions are delivered to his house.. would’ve been nice if he would’ve thrown her out too. But Cindy, I love your writing every story is great this one too. Five stars from me…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Considering the level of writing CindyTV has produced in the past, this one left me flat. There was nothing imaginative, original or thought provoking. Honestly, I was really excited to see something new from Cindy, I was really disappointed with this effort. Don't get me wrong, I would still love to bend Cindy over the arm of my sofa and pound a big load of my jizz into her.
It would have been more interesting and realistic without the 10" dick. 8" isn't that unusual, but 10", very rare. OH, and you forgot to make him black. The wokesters are gonna have a fit. Otherwise, a fun read.
"What really gave it away was finding a man's sock under my dresser, that I knew wasn't mine." - The other guy didn't notice that he was missing a sock?
Cindy doesn't do things by halves, does she? Hope I never get on her bad side. What a burn, five stars!
JR
Fast and Furious. Well done. Maybe a follow on with the boyfriend's comeuppance?
What about the bodybuilder? Letting her know about the illegal cameras kinda wrecked the burn. He's legally toast for that.
@Rockyu62 Known to who - the cheating wife? LoL. How was she going to prove what he said on the phone. This story was perfect 5 Stars - Rich76
Lovely little piece. I love your longer tales as well. The literary license with the cameras in his home is right up there with cameras in hotel or motel rooms. Lovely point of closure. Thank you for the image links as well. More fodder for one who hopes to "Escape" within his own head. Voted for this one because of the emotions invoked. Can't wait for future offerings so I can continue to live within my head.
Okay tale. Camera at his place unnecessary considering he already had photos and good pre-nup. Three Stars.
Very good story & writing. But then, look who the author is. She never fails to deliver.
Having said that, the only problem I have is the husband admitting to installing cameras in the boyfriend's place. He could've let her know otherwise that she's not home, letting her think she's being washed. I'd imagine that'll bring a lawsuit his way, unless he could make the judge accept that he didn't do that. Oh well.
At any rate, this's Cindy's story, & 5 stars. Bob
Okay, I can see the point of burning the bitch in a divorce. But I only vaguely understand the need to try some violent revenge on her lover. IMO, that can show a mental state of the husband which contributes to driving a wife away.
While it takes two to cheat, it only takes the spouse to make the decision. The lover is just a tool, which a cheating spouse could usually replace with another tool. So, I usually consider any thoughts of revenge against the lover to be going overboard.
STOP WITH THE CAMERA COMMENTS! If you read the story, he only admitted it to the slut on a phone call. It's just hearsay! There's no proof, other than her word, and it would NOT stand up in court...unless they had proof. Great short read - 5 stars for the effort.
5 ⭐️ what else do you give a Cindy story right!! Although shorter than her normal works of art, this one still had the same effect.
Great technique, hidden audio/video cameras; who knew? Very original. If you ever want to expand your horizons you might want to include something about the human elements, like motive, morals, emotions, intellectual and ethical weakness.
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On second thought, that will never sell. Just stick with the technology and the details of the vengeance and retribution. Very compelling, and such rich literary depth. You should throw in a beat down from the cock master once he finds out his rich bitch just messed up his plan.
You've heard of attention whores before? Cindy is turning into a "Star" whore!!
Pretty boring. Can't see any reason for planting cameras in the boyfriend's apartment if you already have evidence for the divorce. The dialogue between husband and wife didn't add any excitement or intrigue even if he could see she was lying.
Great story, short and sweet. That cheating bitch will be losing a wonderful life for 3 inches of dick. I would like to read about the trouble coming for the gym boy.
Bet theres gonna be some people who will claim that he severed ties with her too easily.... but many of you seem to forget that not everyone responds emotionally to highly emotional turmoil like a cheating spouse. For some people they pull back into a shell and become cold and hard and extremely detached... which is also a sign of shell shock or ptsd or emotional trauma....there are without doubt millions of people who would react in a very similar fashion as our main guy here.
Well, the part where he asked to the IP to plant some video cameras in her boyfriend's place.... isn't it ilegal? and now that the wife knows what he did, what is going to happen? *
We’ve seen this idiocy before. Who the fuck leaves a house, after screwing someone else’s wife, without one of his socks.
Straight and to the point. I really look forward to Cindy’s stories, they are awesome!
5 stars.
@sbrooks: yeah, I thought the same thing, but then I “assumed” he brought a change of clothes for his Before and After. Either that, or he told his cum-dump to be on the lookout for a sweaty sock but she ignored him once she got her cock fix. Either way, these are very self-centered people who are not overly concerned with screwing up the lives of others.
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@Anonny re “Stop with the camera….”: Sure, it’s only hearsay, until stud-muffin starts looking for the cameras hubby admitted to having planted, and then finds…wait for it…EVIDENCE. At that point, It can’t be very hard to end up with enough reasonable doubt to get a search warrant served (necessary threshold in the US). You’ve got a crime, motive, opportunity, an unrecorded confession and a really stupid perp. If he left a paper or electronic trail, both he and his contractor are busted.
So much for that promotion.
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@CindyTV: gotta agree with others that this was retread material, but I get the impression that its purpose was to marry the story with the images on the other site. No chance you’re going to post them here? Lit does have an Illustrated Story category, you know.
Same Story Part 9,877. Use your considerable writing talents and create something different and not aligned with your usual BTB plot. Three Stars for MC's sheer alacrity and your skill.
I loved it, and gave it 5 stars. Him letting her know about the cameras in the boyfriend's house were mainly just for him, as they wouldn't be legal in court. But then he already knew that and would use the video and pics from his own house in court instead. Nice BTB by the way.
Nice mild BTB. 750, so it is perfect just as it is. Thank you. It's awesome when this author decide to actually be on the side of the victim of cheating.
Another great story. I would love a part 2 telling what happened to the wife and how he got revenge on the boyfriend.
Undoubtedly 5⭐️. I always want to see the aftermath but with some stories all you get is what is on the plate but it was still an excellent BTB story. Thanks for posting it.
so guess the PIs are the illegal kind and probably wont be getting them camaras back lol. but sounds like the dumb husband has the money to pay for them. the wife i guess is believable but wow i mean u sign a prenup that leaves u bankrupt and then chest in an obvious way. there are ppl that dumb out there, more than i like quite sad tbh
5 Stars on a well played divorce . I wish I would have done that . I forgot a prenup on my marriage so she got half of everything here in California . Guys and gals get that prenup . She got a 2200 sq foot house and her car . My laugh of an lawyer was getting her lawyer coffee and donuts . Also get a Great Lawyer
Ben there done that except it was a ring and voice activate recorder on the kome land line before the age of cell phones. The culprit was her former boss and father their son I adopted a one year old. The recorder caught their rendezvouses plans and locations.
I so wanted to watch her downfall as she tries to move in and he says no. Then she is homeless and broke and everything she owns is sitting at her big dicked ex boyfriend’s residence. It would have been so much fun to watch. Still five big stars, two moons and a comet!
I loved it, and gave it 5 big stars. I too would love to see a 2nd part to this. I realize it'll be hard to write, maybe even a challenge.