All Comments on 'My Cousin Avi'

Her name was AVI, but I found no description of abundant pussy hair growing on her mound in this story. Therefore, this must be just another shaved pussy story. So, bottom line, this was just another razor burnt, chaffed pussy mound with pimples, NASTY boils, ingrown hairs, and nasty to look at stubble sticking out of the pus oozing pimples. Either include pubic hair in your pussy description or keep getting ratings of 1. This is because when you leave out the pussy hair, your readers automatically think (have no choice but think) it is just another overly posted SHAVED or BALD pussy with the usual pimples, stubble, ingrown hairs and pus oozing from infected hair pimples story.

I liked it. A pleasant culture shift for me.

Bald pussy is the best!!! Nice story...

Thanks for the positive feedback.

Some women like to be hairy, some like to be shaved. Masturbate over them equally.

Plot-wise I liked it: I don't know if it's something lost in translation or just a deluge of amateur writers, but a lot of Indian incest on this site struggles to make believable characters—thankfully Rupa and Avi are charming young lovers.

My main complaint is the paragraph-per-sentence structure: whenever there's a line-break I take a mental breath, which in a story like this means my attention keeps resetting every couple seconds. Tightening up the text for a smoother flow would only improve the impact.

PS: Disregard the first anon: for months we've been plagued with this evangelizing spam and site moderation isn't lifting a finger against it.

Sir Digby, many thanks for the feedback. I much appreciate you taking the time to read the story and provide feedback.