All Comments on 'My Cousin, Lucy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Part 2

Please write a part 2, so much potential, add on to it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
That's It?

Wheres the rest of it? It was just gettin interestin then it ended =O

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
As is, kinda incomplete

As someone else remarked, it starts in the middle and ends early. If there is a follow-up (and I hope there is - I do enjoy the main character's snarky point of view), it might be better to have a longer, more complete, piece.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Unerotic unfinished teaser !

Would have been a lot better if finished !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Don't bother with this

Not worth reading, the story begins in the middle and has no ending

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