All Comments on 'My Cousin's Visit'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I missed part one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Total waste of a story. Moe, Joe and Hoe ???? who is fucking who?

Havoc100Havoc100about 1 year ago

More dialogue, less telling the story. Don't tell us what the characters said, have them say it. Makes the story more realistic.

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