All Comments on 'My Crush'

Very enticing. Please continue, with many avenues available, it will be interesting to see where this goes.

It’s very sexy but as fantasies go it’s also a bit disturbing/ ‘off’ (to me), the girl is being used as just another sex toy. Ultimately there’s nothing wrong with that provided that all involved understand and accept that, being honest that really doesn’t seem to be the case in this instance.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Great start more please

You write beautifully and honestly

Really good first story. Looking forward to more.

Absolutely titillating! A dark story that is believable and captivating.