All Comments on 'My Dark Knight To Remember'

There are so many mistakes in this story. You switched back and forth between present tense and past. You repeated sentences and everything was very rushed. I see this is your first story so don't get discouraged. Take your time, explore your characters and scenes more. Also, edit, edit, edit. I have no problem helping you with that, if you'd like. Just send me a message. Good luck with future projects.

I liked the story. It's true that it has some errors, but the stroy showed promise.

continue writing, you'll only get better.

I just wanted to say thanks for commenting on my story and telling the truth! I just looked at the story today and yeah... it does need some work you guys!

Thanks

kinda sloppily done, i dont know how they let u submit this w/those chunky paragraphs, the narration was confusing, grammatical and spelling errors were everywhere....an overall bad read.