All Comments on 'My Daughter, My Lover©'

They need to start a family together.

Excellent story in text.. I certainly do love it..!!

I thought the daughter's excuse of not knowing how to "properly" have sex a little naive. I suppose the dialog could have been a tad bit better but I enjoyed the story nonetheless. 4.5 (5)/5*

That was so hot. I couldn’t stop cumming over and over. Incest stories get me going so much

Good premise and plot. The dialogue is a bit stiff, like you're writing a term paper. Try to let their speech flow a bit more naturally.

I'd like to see this storyline continue. Daughters who enjoy sex with their father is always hot

Angus

Chapter 2 please!

5 Stars. Well dome story, very clinical and positive. I don't know what's in their future but if you can figure it out I'll be glad to read it.

Interesting and good potential, but the dialog comes across as weird. It does not sound natural.

First two paragraphs made this impossible to read. You love masturbating your ego way too much.