All Comments on 'My Daughter’s Treat Ch. 01'

"Marie has been out as bisexual since her mid teens".

Which one is it?

Excellent. Can't wait for part 2

These stories are getting more and more pathetic, flawed and getting hard to want to read. You write poorly and should probably get a better hobby.

Can not wait for him to fill his daughter with his seed.

Very, very nice. Good build up and wide open on where the following chapters will lead.

A few confusing bits as already pointed out, and maybe she luxuriated rather than languished in the recliner.

Petty comments cannot demean the quality of this offering.

Critics that do not understand erotic manuscripts are stymied to cheap juvenile banter. THIS IS GOOD!

In addition to the inconsistencies regarding her bisexuality, there's the synopsis.

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"Annie invites Dad to a lifestyle vacation."

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The usual question would be "Who the fuck is Annie?" Sadly, the obvious answer is that the typist cares so little about its own story it can't be bothered with mundane things such as knowing the name of its characters.

This is the first of your submissions I've read, and all I can say is "WOW...that's horrible."

5 Stars. Please continue. I am very excited to read more.

Fantastic!

Why do all of the women on literotica have DDDDD, and bigger, tits??

Any bigger than a C do nothing but get in the way. B cups are perfect-- feel good against the chest, or

hands. They are much more sensitive than the bigger tits.

The huge tits earned 4 stars instead of 5.