All Comments on 'My Daughter's Friend'

Nice premise.

Sex was too automatic. Too mechanical.

Needed more in the way of extended seduction by her of him.

Needed step by step of her body being bared. Needed him being teased/enticed by each part as it became bared.

Needed extended descriptions of her body. Pussy shaved? Hairy? Manicured?

Needed dialog about her having seen how he'd looked at her earlier. Did he like what he saw? What did he like esecially like? Did it make him hard? Was he hard now? She needed to see.

Rushed, particularly once the sex started. Too short. Over too soon.

Three stars.

Veronica shoild be a regular visitor to his bed.

Lucky Dad!

5

Wonderful story, 10 stars! Need a part 2, Veronica may come to him in a month or 2, and tell him she missed her period. She then may tell him, she's not aborting the baby, and she wants a husband...

I enjoyed that a lot! Thank you. 5 Stars.

GREAT story. They should have gone all night --------