All Comments on 'My Demon Succubus - Pt. 11'

by A_N_Fair

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked it. Please bring Luka back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was enjoying this series of stories. This ending feels shortened and rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hopefully, you don't leave the story unfinished, because it's not.

FortheseFortheseover 2 years ago

With all due respect, this is not how a love story should end. Life and reality suck, at least stories are supposed to have a happy end, somehow.

So, Luka and Luke ought to be together. Together they could try to find Luke's mother or cure COVID-19. And be happy together.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 2 years ago

Definitely find a way for him to bring Luka back

nsscotnsscotover 2 years ago
Not done

Feels like a brick dropped.. please continue.

Winter_FareWinter_Fareover 2 years ago

I would love to see Luke find a way to push the boundary the other way, spend some time working on his spiritual strength and soul armour, and go after his beloved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You need to continue maybe he finds a way to get her back

starboy47starboy47about 2 years ago

This story needs to be continued and deserves a happy ending..

Thats why we all have been reading this and what we were waiting for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lame ending

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I am currently working on another non-human story of which I have written the first two chapters. It will be a shorter story which I will continue at a later date as I have two other stories that I want to share. I never quite know where my stories will go - they have a li...

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