All Comments on 'My Dental Hygienist Pt. 02'

Almost difficult to read. Perhaps English is not your fist language? Perhaps, and I think too often, auto complete has interacted with your writing. Just because auto complete is a predominantly English language does not mean it is always correct.

An editor, which I think I have recommended previously, is a necessity. Having competent edition g will vastly improve your style and, the more you write with edits, the fewer edits will occur.

I applaud your attempts and urge you to continue.

I have answered this many times. Yes, there is lots of editors but no one seems to want help me. In the past I have asked from dozens of editors if they would help me but they are not interestid. So I quit asking and use grammarly.

And yes, English is not my first language but I think I can write it better than most English speaking write Finnish.😆

Sometimes your line of though gets lost in the bad grammar I have to re-read it several times. There must be someone that could/would edit your stories. I find the plot line so very interesting to read I must keep going.

I do understand the problem with english not being your first language. I have trouble with it and it is my first and only language. Keep trying please.

The grammar is horrendous, and the way you jump around makes no sense at all

I found the story very easy to understand and got me very hard.

@a_hornet that was nice to know that it made the trick for you.