All Comments on 'My Descent into Slavery Ch. 09'

This episode splashes with love and joy, a delight to read.

Always pulling the heart strings.

I don't know what to say.

I LOVED IT. Every damn drop.

This story is finally getting back to the right stuff. Now let's do these weddings and get back on the boat.

The change is Beth’s behaviour is made very obvious in your representation, she’s very laid back about all things sex. It’s also obvious that she’s more promiscuous, Kilo was a good example of a temporary partner, poor guy was basically a cock with legs.

Love how the story is progressing. Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Another grand chapter, and now with 4 weddings coming up with 2 Grooms and 6 Brides! Keeping track of people, with Fatima marring Edgar and Hibbah marring Jake it seems that Farah is the only freed slave to not be in some kind of relationship with someone. Perhaps we'll find out more as part of or after the wedding extravaganza or when everyone settles down once they are all aboard the "American Entrepreneur".

Thor's Fist, thank you, I'm really enjoying the ride!

Mostly this was simply a great chapter to enjoy. So much action I wouldn’t know where to begin! You either have a phenomenal memory or you keep notes on each character and their histories. Sometimes I have to stop a moment to remind myself where someone came into the story! I’m wondering how Sahar and Joshua will do in this new relationship. So far, so good, but it seems to me that Joshua and Beth will need to get reacquainted, and I wonder if Sahar will really feel ok about some things Joshua is used to doing with Beth. I hope Beth and Sahar get some quality time with Marcia and Chanterelle;). And Sahar and Lucy should be a fabulous friendship! Sometimes I wish I hadn’t found your stories until this one, at least, was completed. I twitch when I read the last page! But I remember losing a fair amount of sleep reading all of WBDP as fast as I could and all the stories since might’ve been the death of me! Fwiw, I think you’re being true to Beths character. She’s not the same. To write her as she was would be a lie. In time, I’m sure she will heal more. Thanks, as always, for a first class read

I am so glad to see how great Beth is doing, but she has missed like 5 to 6 months of the cruise and 5-6 months of working on her research, so it going to be interesting to see how it all continues, but reading this you can tell right now that the timeline here is set just before the end of Becoming a Cuckold Ch. 14 just after Richard returns back to NY. So it will be interesting to see how it all turns out as the chapters continue, and what going so great and funny is when they get to LA they meet Chloe and maybe Dianne.

But I can't wait to read about the wedding and what comes next.

I had to stop and think as William and Evelyn were telling Beth what was going on with Richard. I was trying to figure out when across your multiple story threads, multiple characters, and multiple time lines when William and his family would fly out to Los Angeles without Richard (who was William's personal assistant) while Richard still didn't know that Marnie got pregnant using Richard's sperm donation, rather than being "accidently" knocked up by Andre. William obviously knew the secret. I had to go back and reread "Becoming a Cuckold" chapter 14. I'm assuming that this happened during Richard's week of vacation early in that chapter. This is all fitting together like pieces of a large jigsaw puzzle. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapters as more of the pieces drop into place and the overall picture stands out in its full glory.

You are a truly gifted story teller.

a cameral is a legislative or judicial body, somehow I doubt Joshua has one in his pocket after dining at a resort

Great instalment and fabulous to see everything coming together. I guess Joshua's surprise will be some of Beth's Norwegian family.

Got confused with the Richard and Marie business. You must have one hell of a storyboard to keep all these characters and the story moving forward. Brilliant again.

A tear came to my eye. Good one.