All Comments on 'My Diary: Entry 06 - Once More...'

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jmkuehnjmkuehn3 months ago

Ok, you've gone off the rails here. This makes no sense. Cake doesn't act like this and Luke went from D to pussy in 1 chapter. I'm done

PappasleazePappasleaze3 months ago

not sure where you are heading here, but the telling of this scene was done well.

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I am interested in the perverse, dreaming of scenarios many would consider wrong. I attempt to capture those dreamings in my stories, so that those who seek the wrongness can find a safe space to share in my dreams. Let us partake in a perverse world of perverted people. What ...