by jd8406
Wouldn't it be confusing for 2 boys in the house to be named the same thing. Tom Cooper
Sorry, för this Part 4 Stars fit. With the first chapter to end with rich expectations the second was fine in the beginnings but then I expected two thirds were just some kind of aftermath. You started to report sex without the feel of intermediate, personal connections but it drained to a tale of whom impregnated who and so on. It was lame to me.
you've great stories ! I think that they would become exceptional if you considered illustrating them . Literotica has many talented artists to help in this venue . Keep up in your writings , I enjoy following your work .
Excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Very interesting plot. Looking forward to each additional chapter. 5 stars.
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