by regularguy13
Good job with this chapter but the sex at the end seems very hurried, ether do it right or don't at all.
As one of your programs, I might suggest some sex demonstrations.
Also, how about more bisexual situations between women and between men
Love it so far but the chapters need to be "bigger" "longer" Keep writing.
You have received dozens of critical comments, which you have quickly erased, pointing out your disrespect of writing conventions. This chapter continues the abuse of English you seem so proud to inflict.
The story has finally started to come together. More installments, please. This has been one of the better chapters in this series.