All Comments on 'My Favorite Girl Pt. 02'

That can't be where it ends

What's with that ending? Is there another part coming? What happens next? The story doesn't feel complete.

That last three paragraphs just killed the story, taking it from 4or 5 stars down to a low 3. Loved it right up till that point, now I'm left with WTF just happened. And that just after having the completely over-protective and over-bearing father suddenly turn into a clueless idiot.

Please continue the story it needs some kind of ending

Please don't let that be the ending! Great story. Please, for the love of whatever, let him love her, and be brave...

Really need to continue this story! Don't leave it hanging.

Agree with many of the comments regarding the last page, but I can't help but give a well written story with solid character development and consistent story arc (as slow moving as it is...) 5*. I hope the next chapter moves us along with their relationship and all the trials and tribulations that will come with it. In big scheme of things, first cousins isn't as profound of a taboo as it would be for siblings. I imagine "Ronnie" will freak out but I'm thinking "Joy" already knows/suspects what's going on. (Even though you've had her part minimized...) No way it stops here - so look forward to #3!

Loved These two lovebirds.

Great characters and nice Plot. Very well written.

So 5 stars and please continue these storie, there is a lot untold

You can write and write well so I rated high in accordance to the kind of site this is. As a serious story though the main character was misogynistic, close minded, and a "superman" that made it impossible to identify with. He had it all and his only faults were even his, just a deadbeat mom. Disappointing.

A very beautiful, romantic and hot story.

It's nice to see how love is born. Their mutual feelings have been there for a long time. They are just still afraid to admit them, even to themselves. Sex is just fun and an opportunity to step up. No strings attached. But they both know it's much more than just sex.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great characters, great plotting, but holy SHIT you write hot sex! A completely different plane from most writers here, even some of the best ones. Can't wait for a chance to read the next chapters.

Love the reality of the relationships all around. Look forward to more fun and the family.

This story is terrific, reading part 3 now.