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Anonymousabout 20 years agoGood, sexy story
Luv, you've got a talent. I'll read all your stories. Thanks.
Anonymousabout 20 years agoTry an editor
The grammer and spelling was so bad that I couldn't read the story. You need an editor. There is nothing more distracting to me than improper tense usage, and this is loaded with that.
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