All Comments on 'My First Hot Wife Experience'

The writing is terrible and written as by a 13-year old. For example, there is a difference between "loosing" and "losing." Writing is riddled with errors. The story holds no interest at all. It is short, but I am unsure whether to be thankful that it was so short or just point out that author had nothing to say. A deserved 1*.

I agree with previous comment.

pppfffhhht.

The title caught my attention because one of my early sexual experiences in college was being the third in a married couple's threesome. It was amazing and thrilling, and she was a tigress. Unfortunately, I got a case of gonorrhea from her, so I paid a price. Good story.

Far too many distracting errors - get an editor or proof reader.

My wife loves young mens dicks and one for me

Post more stories and be sure to edit or have someone else read it. Grammar and proper punctuation is important with this crowd.

A young man identifies as a whorewife. Not that unbelievable today.

Thank you for the feedback everyone. I see a proof reader / editor in my future.

One more thing, Don't be a wussy. If you have criticism, man up and put your name on it.

Dream story! Thank you.