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All Comments on 'My First Official Nude Day'

by olderguy56

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 6 years ago
Great first story

But you do need an editor. Read my feedback, please.

kafkafalmost 6 years ago
Get an editor.

Get an editor. Your story is littered with schoolboy errors. For example, 'ware' instead of 'wear', 'than' instead of 'then' and do you really not know that 'start' has a letter 'r' in it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wrong category!S

Stop placing gay stories in non-gay categories. You are wasting people's time. Quit being PIGS.

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