by olderguy56
Stop placing gay stories in non-gay categories. You are wasting people's time. Quit being PIGS.
Get an editor. Your story is littered with schoolboy errors. For example, 'ware' instead of 'wear', 'than' instead of 'then' and do you really not know that 'start' has a letter 'r' in it?
But you do need an editor. Read my feedback, please.