All Comments on 'My First One Night Stand'

by I_am_just_writing

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clackormanclackormanover 3 years ago
First time reader...

...but it won’t be the last! I’m so glad to have happened across this story. I’m not sure how I’ve missed your others, but I plan on getting caught up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The unknown details

I like the unknown details-like you said, we can make the story our own that way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Second night stand

Great story, especially the nervous emotions on hooking up at a club.

Perhaps he could come round to yours and could help you with your anal play, rimming you, perhaps having sex while using a plug in your butt, lots of great possibilities! Also he could then meet your roomie! You'd need a good reason for him to come round rather than simply for a second session; your roomie could be studying with him at college unbeknownst to you and bring him back for some reason

Anyway keep up the good work!

oldcrow13oldcrow13over 3 years ago
Another Perfect Story

I love your approach to writing. The hints at your character's insecurities enhance the realism of your story, for example Michael wasn't expecting to bring a woman home that night was a nice touch. I also appreciate not having a description of her DD boobs or his 10" dick; much better leaving room for the imagination

Sexually, Rae and Mike seem a good match. .True love may be too fairy taleon, but I think they make great fuck buddies. So, I would love to see their story continued.

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