All Comments on 'My First Sin Ep. 01'

Comments and Reviews Welcome, Sweetie's!

wonderful keep going

Correction in the first line: *counter point 'to' the cold shrill currents. <3

Will write ep 2 if I get either 50 reviews or 10 comments!

Nice plot line…Keep going. Explore the plot with Gautam watching and getting aroused.

Nice story

It's more than just a plot-line, its auto-fiction. So, sowie.. my life's journey dictates the plot.

A good start, a little short for the beginning of the plot but expecting it be more interesting in coming episodes.

Nice plot, waiting for the next part of the story

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