All Comments on 'My First Submission to Sex'

I dont like Rape no matter how you write it.

Well then you shouldn't be reading stories in the NC section you douchebag. Nobody wants to hear you complain about something you read willingly.

Not terribly believable, but hot nonetheless. Not sure why you went to third person in the last paragraph or why the lit editors would let such an obvious mistake pass. Always reread your work before submitting it. You'll catch obvious mistakes like that one.

I read it twice before I submitted it and I didn't even notice the third person in the last paragraph. My bad. Take things seriously why don't you...

I hate the people who read things in the noncon section and then comment about how they hate rape. I loved the story, and didn't notice the third person until it was pointed out.